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Wubs and Noms by PisumSativum Wubs and Noms by PisumSativum
Vinyl eating a PB&J sammitch.

Done as a request from Blaccuweather!
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Vision:
It's a pretty good looking drawing. THe only reason why I didn't put 5 stars is because when I first looked at the drawing, I thought it would be an animation because of the almost blank space left at the right. (Not that I'm disapointed it's not an animation, it's just that I find the space on the right too blank. You should have added something in it.)

Originality:
I really like the title. Pretty character/drawing fitting. I like the fact that after wubbing like a boss, Vinyl will be nomming like a boss. Maybe you could have added something like a vinyl drawn with jam on the toast, but overall, I find it pretty good in terms of originality.

Technique:
Pretty good overall. Nice looking wood texture, perspective is good, colors are nice too. But, once again, I find the right part of the drawing too blank. You should have added a window at the right of the wall behind Scratch. And if you have some troubles drawing background, you could have just colored the window with a blue-ish color and added some reflectoins (Like on Scratch's shades)

Impact:
Well, it's a really cute drawing. I can picture perfectly Scratch have some meal right after making some good mixes, and Octavia thinking in the other room "Okay...I've got 5 minutes to find some ear plugs".


Overall:
Pretty nice drawing. Also, this is my critique, and these are your drawing. You do whatever you want with your drawing and you think whatever you want of my critique. But since you asked for a critique, I thought I could go for it :)
Anyway. you did a pretty good job on this drawing, and except two-three points that disturbs me a little, I love it.
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:icontony-akita:
Tony-Akita Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
She looks pretty cute eating that sandwich. :3
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:icon00pony:
00Pony Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I now have a sudden taste for Peanut Butter and Jelly...
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:iconstickman00:
stickman00 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
It's a Unicorn eating asandwich... WHY IS IT SO ADORABLE
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:iconnova20cp:
Nova20CP Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
Sandvich? .-.
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:iconlibra-w:
Libra-W Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
:itspeanutbutterjellytime:
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:iconnova20cp:
Nova20CP Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Cake. :]
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:iconraverider:
RaveRider Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute and delicious! :heart: :) 8-)
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:iconzorua570:
Zorua570 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why she didn't use her magic instead X3
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:iconpisumsativum:
PisumSativum Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Because it's Octavia's turn to clean the kitchen!
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:iconzorua570:
Zorua570 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh i see X3
anyway good job there matey :D
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:iconpkmntraineredgar:
PkMnTrainerEdgar Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
nom nom nom
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:iconpisumsativum:
PisumSativum Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OM NOMNOM, NOM NOM. OOOH SANDVICH MAKE ME STROOOONG!
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:iconangelofrombelow:
angelofrombelow Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
This is the best drawing in your gallery and I approve of it highly. You just know that filling is going to end up everywhere - use your magic to hold it, Vinyl!
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:iconnova-w-hoof:
Nova-W-Hoof Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
SANDVICH!!!!!
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:iconfluxperpetua:
FluxPerpetua Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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:iconstickman00:
stickman00 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
I couldn't love you anymore than I do now
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:iconhelsaabi:
Helsaabi Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
That so cute! <3
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:icon290pika:
290Pika Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
Haha, very cute! I wonder if Octavia made her that sandwich? :lol:

Also, I like your variation on the pony style here. It looks like a looser style than the vectored FiM, which I think fits Scratch quite nicely. :D
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:iconstarshinecelestalis:
StarshineCelestalis Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I used to wonder what friendship could be
until you shared your sandwich with me
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:icon290pika:
290Pika Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
Exactly! :dummy:

Now someone really needs to make a Flash parody of the opening theme. xD
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:iconstarshinecelestalis:
StarshineCelestalis Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I had any skill in Flash or could sing I would try...I can't :(
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:icon290pika:
290Pika Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
I need to learn how to use Flash.

...and maybe learn how to sing too. :noes:
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:iconstarshinecelestalis:
StarshineCelestalis Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would prefer flash to singing, though that is my inner/outer nerd speaking.
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:iconobelisk-star:
Obelisk-Star Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
She really taught me what friendship could mean that day.
And, it was delicious
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:iconstarshinecelestalis:
StarshineCelestalis Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was a great video.
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:iconobelisk-star:
Obelisk-Star Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed, your comment fit the video well. So I felt obliged to post the quote.

Now if only we could fit a bass cannon comment somewhere.
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:iconstarshinecelestalis:
StarshineCelestalis Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I do believe you just did. :iconbasscannonplz:
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:iconpisumsativum:
PisumSativum Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Probably not! If Octy is in fact from Trottingham, and the Trottingham-British parallels are in anyway accurate...

Let's just say the notion of PB&J is looked at with disdain over here in the UK :P
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:icon290pika:
290Pika Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
:noes:

I did not learn such a thing from the British-Americans I stayed with over the summer last year. We would have PB&J all the time for lunch (or peanut butter and Nutella, mmm).
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DustyScarecrow Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Om Nom Nom
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:iconalphagamer774:
alphagamer774 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dat pose. :P
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:iconthewickedrainbow:
thewickedrainbow Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
My Little Dj: Friendship is Sandwich
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:icondelsin07:
Delsin07 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Eating sammiches without hands must be hard....Jelly, Hugh everywhere! (also grats on EQD feature)
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:iconpisumsativum:
PisumSativum Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait, what?

...Holy Carp, didn't notice the EQD feature o.o

(Thanks though!)
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:iconklshadowdragon:
klShadowDragon Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Probably not that hard for unicorns.
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:iconalexkuro:
AlexKuro Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Would the "Peanut Butter Jelly Time" bit be to obvious?
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:iconpisumsativum:
PisumSativum Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm, wonder if there's a dubstep remix of that...
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:iconmlpminis:
MLPMinis Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
She really showed her what friendship could mean that day, and it was delicious :aww:
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:iconzaiali:
zaiali Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
eating a pb&j there Vinyl? would you like :iconnutellaplz: with that instead?

nice job!
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:iconeverlastingjoy:
EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
:iconhnnnnngplz:
It's. . . So. . . Cute!
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:iconcoolclaytony:
coolclaytony Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Octavia: Would you like the rest of the sandwich?
Vinyl: :iconsadvinylplz: *You really are a true friend...*
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:iconnowacking:
Nowacking Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
This is adorable haha You happen to know if this a reference to "Epic Wub Time?" :P
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:iconpisumsativum:
PisumSativum Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Only very slightly...

I asked a ton of people for requests months ago, and this was one in the list (Vinyl eating PB&J).

However, I did kinda knick the wall colour from a certain animation that you may or may not have been involved in. Maybe.
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:iconnowacking:
Nowacking Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
Aahhh ic haha :3
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:iconpyrobug0:
Pyrobug0 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
D'aaaw.
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:icontheirishbronyx:
theirishbronyx Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WUB NOM WUB NOM WUB NOM NOM
WUB NOM WUB NOM NOM NOM
WUB NOM NOM WUB NOM NOM

Yay for DJ!
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:iconnyax:
Nyax Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is SO cute.
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:iconfyrestorm58355:
fyrestorm58355 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Octy gave her that, didn't she? :)
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:iconpisumsativum:
PisumSativum Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She really did find out the true meaning of friendship that day.
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:iconwertyla:
Wertyla Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
So cute! The jelly matches her eyes! :)
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