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Wubs and Noms by PisumSativum Wubs and Noms by PisumSativum
Vinyl eating a PB&J sammitch.

Done as a request from Blaccuweather!
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Vision:
It's a pretty good looking drawing. THe only reason why I didn't put 5 stars is because when I first looked at the drawing, I thought it would be an animation because of the almost blank space left at the right. (Not that I'm disapointed it's not an animation, it's just that I find the space on the right too blank. You should have added something in it.)

Originality:
I really like the title. Pretty character/drawing fitting. I like the fact that after wubbing like a boss, Vinyl will be nomming like a boss. Maybe you could have added something like a vinyl drawn with jam on the toast, but overall, I find it pretty good in terms of originality.

Technique:
Pretty good overall. Nice looking wood texture, perspective is good, colors are nice too. But, once again, I find the right part of the drawing too blank. You should have added a window at the right of the wall behind Scratch. And if you have some troubles drawing background, you could have just colored the window with a blue-ish color and added some reflectoins (Like on Scratch's shades)

Impact:
Well, it's a really cute drawing. I can picture perfectly Scratch have some meal right after making some good mixes, and Octavia thinking in the other room "Okay...I've got 5 minutes to find some ear plugs".


Overall:
Pretty nice drawing. Also, this is my critique, and these are your drawing. You do whatever you want with your drawing and you think whatever you want of my critique. But since you asked for a critique, I thought I could go for it :)
Anyway. you did a pretty good job on this drawing, and except two-three points that disturbs me a little, I love it.
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:icontypicalzangoosefan:
TypicalZangooseFan Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
She looks pretty cute eating that sandwich. :3
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:icon00pony:
00Pony Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I now have a sudden taste for Peanut Butter and Jelly...
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:iconstickman00:
stickman00 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
It's a Unicorn eating asandwich... WHY IS IT SO ADORABLE
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:iconnova20cp:
Nova20CP Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
Sandvich? .-.
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:iconlibra-w:
Libra-W Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
:itspeanutbutterjellytime:
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:iconnova20cp:
Nova20CP Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Cake. :]
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:iconraverider:
RaveRider Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute and delicious! :heart: :) 8-)
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:iconzorua570:
Zorua570 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why she didn't use her magic instead X3
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:iconpisumsativum:
PisumSativum Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Because it's Octavia's turn to clean the kitchen!
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:iconzorua570:
Zorua570 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh i see X3
anyway good job there matey :D
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